If I was a Horse I would be awake in
the long,dry,day and when I’ll be hungry
I would would eat my soft,crunchy hay.
If I was a Horse when I’ll be scared I’ll
MAAHY and when I see a apple I think hooray.
If I was a Horse I would play on the long,dry
field and I would play until the day becomes
night.
And If I was a Horse I would gallop away and
come back at the end of the day.
BY
MAX!!
Max I really like you poem because you have added some rhyming words like MahhhYYY and HOORRAAYYY. I also love the fact that you have astonishing describing words
ReplyDeleteNice poem Max I liked how you made it rhyme and all the adjectives.Good job!
ReplyDeleteI like how you use MAHHHYYYand HOORRAAYYY.also is a really good poem
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